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Everybody loves you when you're easy
Everybody hates you when you're a bore


Everybody needs you when you don't care
Everybody neglects you when you're helpful

Everybody wants you when you're gone
Everybody loathes you when you're there

Everybody's sweet when you're distasteful
Everybody's doubtful when you're lavish

Everybody explains when you get it
Everybody ignores when you're confused

Why can't everybody be in Black and White?

Everybody is a different shade of grey
©2006-2010 ~Zee-H
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The first two lines are from a Sarah McLachlan song, "Black and White." I liked them a lot, so I just wrote them down, and kind of elaborated =p

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Very cool. Insipartion from other artists is always nice. I liked your word choice and the crispness of your comparisons. I can definitely see how this relates to real life. Good Job.

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wow, thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it :)

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thank you

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:iconbakagothickitsune:
I <3 this poem. The repetition works really well, and the last two lines are very profound. It's interesting that the first two lines are the ones I like the least. O__o"

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Thanks a lot! :hug: I'm glad you liked it

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I really like the idea of the different colors. I think it really paints a distinct feeling. ty

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In this world of perfect imperfection,
I am but a poet
Lost in the turbulence, as is everyone
For everything is unstable

And when the crowd gives questions,
I will give statements
And when the crowd gives statements,
I will give questions
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wow super good!!! :) :clap:

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